Today I want to talk about a common issue with "likely" and "probably", as well as reasons you should use them sparingly and selectively in your narrative writing. So what's the problem? Often, "likely" and "probably" are used to explain something to the reader that's technically outside the main character's knowledge. Example: He scowled at… Continue reading The Problem with “Likely” and “Probably”
Author: Avery Ames
Music Monday: “The Keys”
This song helped start it all. One of my ongoing projects began with a very vague concept about a faerie bargain gone wrong and a 17-track playlist to set the mood. Unwoman's "The Keys (Deconstructed Mix by Deconbrio)" opened the mix, and its sound inspired much of the early draft of Cambiare.https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=qQ90l7MFq3k
My 5 Repeat Offenses in Writing
We all have those crutches and quirks that weaken our writing, and I am no exception. As it's generally good advice to be aware of your own weaknesses, I'm pointing out mine.I don’t even worry about these vices during the drafting phase, but I’ve learned to have a keen eye for them in revision. 1.… Continue reading My 5 Repeat Offenses in Writing
Why is my book boring?
So you've sent your book off to beta readers and you get some heart-sinking feedback: your story is dull or the reader lost interest partway through. There are many reasons a reader's engagement can falter, but today I'm going to address one I see often: lack of tension. At any given point in your book, there… Continue reading Why is my book boring?
Music Monday: “Legend”
I have never made any secret of my love for the 1985 movie, Legend. Unicorns, a visually-stunning setting, and truly grotesque goblins with amazing makeup effects by Rob Bottin? Count me in. And need I mention Tim Curry in an absolutely perfect, devilish performance as the villain? But quite possibly my favorite part of the… Continue reading Music Monday: “Legend”
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