We all have those crutches and quirks that weaken our writing, and I am no exception. I don’t even worry about these vices during the drafting phase, but I’ve learned to have a keen eye for them in revision.So what are my greatest personal crimes against storytelling? 1. Filter Words Hoo boy, do my characters …
Why is my book boring?
So you've sent your book off to beta readers and you get some heart-sinking feedback: your story is dull or the reader lost interest partway through. There are many reasons a reader's engagement can falter, but today I'm going to address one I see often: lack of tension. At any given point in your book, there …
Music Monday: “Legend”
I have never made any secret of my love for the 1985 movie, Legend. Unicorns, a visually-stunning setting, and truly grotesque goblins with amazing makeup effects by Rob Bottin? Count me in. And need I mention Tim Curry in an absolutely perfect, devilish performance as the villain? But quite possibly my favorite part of the …
5 People Who Should Read Your Manuscript
Your first draft is done! It’s time to do some self-editing and then send out queries or self-publish, right? Nope. Five types of people can help you with your manuscript before it gets into the hands of the reading public. Some of these are optional, but others are mandatory if you want to put out …
Short Story: Summer’s Gift
I wrote this short story over ten years ago, and every once in a while I take it out, dust it off, revise a bit, and stow it away. I think it's time to share it here. Autumn Autumn sighed, the rustle of dead leaves in a chill breeze. He stirred, his black eyes narrowing …
Get Up and Try Again (Music Monday)
Publishing is hard. Whether you're going traditional or self-publishing, rejection is a part of the game. Query rejections. Edit letters or beta feedback that rip your manuscript apart. Negative reviews. Sometimes it can feel relentless. So if you're feeling a bit down about your manuscript or your writing journey, give this playlist a listen. Allow …
5 Ways to Be Your Own Fandom
I often joke that "I'm my own fandom" when it comes to my books, and I'm not lying. Sometimes, these little fannish things can keep the fire alive if I'm burnt out on drafting or revising. If you're finding yourself feeling uninspired, give one or two of these a shot: 1. Commission Things This includes …
